Reviews for stage left
LilyYumikoRockMe chapter 1 . 6/8
The first word should be YOU'RE, not your. The same goes for "yourohso" as it should be YOU'REohso. Same goes for "& your Audrey Hepburn beautiful" and it should be YOU'RE.
One thing, though.
"you butterfly smile." It should be YOUR butterfly smile.

Oh, you're a good poet-don't say I flamed you or anything like that. H~o~w~e~v~e~r, you need to check up on your grammar, like A LOT!
anon chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
sharpies are awesome :)
riotmaker chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
so amazingly beautiful. gorgeous pictures and wonderful descriptions of pain.

lovelovelovelovelove it.
ApresMoiLeDeluge chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
'& you leave

five lines of poetry on every neck your lips crash into'

Gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous.

And I love the Audrey Hepburn/Marilyn Monroe references. Elegant and beautiful versus tragic and mysterious.

And I agree, AtrophyObesession. Face Down and Seventeen Ain't So Sweet come in close second.
x account closed x chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
powerful and so articulate you have a way with words that i'd kill for, yep. i love the first line (and the repitition of it later) that was cool of you :).

j. cash is amazing and i missed you!
not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
i love the old movie star references and the blue kool aid image was particularly striking, a muchly enjoyable piece here, excellent job
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 10/23/2006



sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/23/2006

'& you leave

five lines of poetry on every neck your lips crash into'

Just stunning.

Sent shivers down my spine.