Reviews for No Name Poem
Katrina O.o chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
Well, I'm not going to even pretend I fully understand it, but honestly, thats what I love about your work. I don't understand all of it, but yet, I do...

I like the slight repitition, and my favorite stanza was:

"Before this time between us is inevitably up

I want to inform you it was more than enough

That you stood in front of me and acted so tough

Even if we were both broken straight down to the buff"

Maybe next time I'll be able to give you a better review.


(hugs and kisses never last: shoot your loved ones.

that just randomly came to me...)