Reviews for My Not So Average Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I m going to cry..crying badly...how could u just left this story unfinished. ? Plz continue na...What about their 1st night. ..mummy that's not fair . :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay this made me laugh..a lot. and sean is so darn sexy, i mean one second he's acting all perveted and mean towards ally, and then he'll be soo sweet and considerate...awww. i love this story. UPDATE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() Darn. Just when you were getting to the good part. As the story progressed, Sean was becoming increasingly sexy and irresistible. Too bad we won't be getting any sexy time between him and Ally. *insert cheeky grin* |
![]() ![]() THIS THE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER SO DAMN ROMANTIC I LIKED THE PHRASE "God, I felt like an ass. Here he had been giving me expensive bracelet, expressing emotions, and naming a damn lake after me! " and the end was perfect too |
![]() ![]() A SUGGESTION WE NEED A LITTLE BIT OF JEALOUSY TO MAKE THE STORY LITTLE SPICY |
![]() ![]() OH GOD SEAN SEEMS JEALOUS |
![]() ![]() so far so good |
![]() ![]() OMG! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great continue it please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can't stop here I need to know what happens now after she did all that. I'm glad she didn't just give in and do something with him when he acts so perverted. I can't wait to see what's going to happen in the morning. Update soon. Please. :) |
![]() ![]() Update soon! It's sooooooooo good! :) Such an interesting story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() so... wheres that honeymoon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue! You can't stop! I've reread this story many times and I can't help but love the cuteness that the show so please continue to update! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you given up on this? I LOVE IT! PLEAASE WRITE MORE(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Scratch my last review I read the rest and it's amazing how your writing style improved over the chapters. I see you haven't update in ages, but please do sometime soon because I really really like this story now, and they would be so cute as a married couple :) |