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   ColourCascade chapter 2 . 4/9/2012 I'm only up to chapter 3 so far but I just thought of something if you wanted to improve your writing. Your writing style is pretty awesome and sometimes the way you write things makes me smile cos you worded it so it was funny. So it's really good at the moment but I thought I'd let you know about this thing I learned in English class which my teacher called 'show not tell'. Basically instead of just saying she was scared or angry you describe how she is feeling through her actions or by using emotive words. So for example instead of saying 'I was so scared if him then' she could do something like cower away or something to show not tell. Do you get it? That's all I'll continue reading! :) |
| Lethaldoze chapter 13 . 2/27/2012 This story is TOTALLY AWESOME! At first I was hating Sean because he was such a snob and being a total ass to Ally. But the transformation of Sean and Ally, you've written so beautifully that you can't just hate Sean anymore! This story is truly very amazing and the chemistry between Sean and Ally super sexy! Please update soon! D |
| Laken8 chapter 13 . 2/11/2012 I'm hooked! Keep writing this! |
| teamastley101 chapter 13 . 2/9/2012 amazing story but update? its been over two years |
| babodite chapter 13 . 1/4/2012 Just wanted to say how much I LOVE this story! And I'll wait as patiently as I have to for the next chapter! Please update soon! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/28/2011 Seriously,I'm loving this story, but unfortunately I am not loving the cliff hanger. Come on please continue writing and finishing this story. It is awesome and I just finished reading Mafias are good at keeping secrets which was a great story too. Please i havent found awesome stories to read so not that i have please continue writting! :D Please! |
| Binkybaby chapter 13 . 9/17/2011 Update soon! |
| Everlasting Dreams chapter 13 . 5/15/2011 Heheee :3 I love reading about drunk people, LOLL ! Update soon :)) |
| Alixermixer chapter 13 . 3/16/2011 I know that is has been about a year and a half since you last wrote but I really hope that you come back. The story is soo good and now that the newlyweds like each other, it can only go up from there (I know there will be bumps in the road ;}) but I really hope that you finish! |
| Jayy161 chapter 6 . 1/29/2011 LOL! i absolutely love this story! hahahahha! |
| hyperpiggyblue chapter 13 . 1/22/2011 when r u going to update D: |
| darknightstar chapter 13 . 12/24/2010 i love it! please update more! |
| SashyKiller chapter 13 . 12/21/2010 This story is wicked. You need to update ASAP! _~ |
| yagiyniguez chapter 1 . 11/28/2010 UPDATE PLEASE :( |
| Liberty chapter 13 . 11/7/2010 I will kill you if you don't update soon! I'm loving by the way! |