this story is awesome...i loved the first part of this chapter...and i love the wedding dress part too...i just love all of it actually, lol! it's really good...keep writing and update soon!

I love it!

Good chapter. I hope you update soon!

hey, good chapter again...it was really funny the whole way through... have a merry christmas!..and maybe update soon :)?

ok so seriously i totally love this story...i am like hooked...i really really liked this chapter...it was cool to see a different side of Sean(i loved it when he carried her up to their room)...his romantic and soft side and not his macho cocky one...your contrast of Ally and Sean makes the story interesting and exciting...keep writing...you've got talent...can't wait for the next update!(soon please?:)...)

Sean is irritating me! He's got no respect for women and so discriminating. I wish we'd see changes in him soon. I also hope we'd get to see Ally's good softer side. We've been seeing too much aggressiveness. Although of course I wouldn't want her to give in to Sean's advances. I dunno, somehow I'm just visualizing Sean learning from Ally's good-natured acts.

UPDATE!

i'm hooked.

i love this story! this was beautiful. please update soon! i love how stubborn she is while yelling at him at how his stubborness...HE SICKENS ME! but i love this story!

WOW! It is really good! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I love both of your stories! The descriptions of the characters are really good. You should keep writing-you are definately talented! Update soon :)!

I really like the story so far! It has a good plot and characters. Update soon!