Reviews for My Not So Average Life
abbiexcx1990x chapter 13 . 7/31/2010
Are you continuing this? If so please update soon. It is really starting to get good.
Kaylie Ashling chapter 2 . 7/28/2010
This is really good so far but I just wanted to point out in Chapter one and two, you have a word error I guess you can call it that, in both chapter. For example in Chapter two,

"GOD! Are you that stuck up! You think you're better than everybody else don't you!" You said becoming angry with him. Which instead of saying 'You said' it needs to be 'I said,' but good story so far.
cyberfalcon chapter 13 . 4/8/2010
great chapter! they are hella sexy :) lol
Guest chapter 13 . 4/6/2010
when are you going to go on with the story? its been agess, please continue... been waiting a very very very VERY LONG time to see the next partt ! just plan the story out and maybe even finish it then post it on fictionpress.
Sandy.H chapter 13 . 1/29/2010
ilove ur story plz update soon :)
sarcasm is my middle name chapter 13 . 1/14/2010
Omfg, you ruined tradition! What is wrong with you? Kidding, great story i love it!
Garneau chapter 13 . 1/10/2010
I'm so excited that you updated!

I love your stories.

You stay very loyal to the characters' peronalities. Which is really good seeing as many writers completely change their characters after they spent half the story developing them. You have a really good style of writing. Some writers can get carried away with describing things, like when people disect the attire, make up and hair of the character whenever they have a wardrobe change. It really slows down the story and wreaks the flow, but you are able to keep it to the point where you give enough description to visualise what's happening and therefore allowing the story to continue incredibly. There are a few errors, but they are fairly subtle and so they don't wreck the reading of the story. Well done on this story so far. I really think your work has the potential to be published in hardcopy.

I can't wait until you update again (with this story and your other ones),

desmoulins.
BittersweetHearts08 chapter 13 . 12/31/2009
Okay, Girl! you really need to update this story something fast! I want to read more but there are no more chapters :(

Also where are they going on their honeymoon? Do you remember when she asked where he vacationed and he named off like 5 awesome places like Paris and i don't remember, but I think what would be cute is Sean surprising her and taking her to all those places! It would be so sweet! anyways please update for my own sanity! :)
BittersweetHearts08 chapter 10 . 12/31/2009
Okay I LOVED this chapter too! SO CUTE! I like all the cute fluffiness! It's sweet to know what Sean thinks of Ally! :)
BittersweetHearts08 chapter 6 . 12/31/2009
okay so i'm going to review this story for the 4 time haha! I REALLY liked this chapter! I love Sean's sweet side! he needs to be nice and caring all the time! ;)
BittersweetHearts08 chapter 5 . 12/31/2009
buahaha! Liddy was funny! I think I would have screamed at her to shut up if I was Ally haha! oh and I totally loved the tickle scene! super cute! :)
BittersweetHearts08 chapter 4 . 12/31/2009
I love this! I have been to England and lived there for two months... and I want to give you some constructive criticism if you ever choose to publish this story:

No one in Engladn let alone the UK listens to country music, so if you choose to publish I would put in a different song instead of a Shania Twain song (as much as I love that one haha).

Also, The upper class Brits NEVER pinch cheeks. I think that's an American thing. They would take your hand, but NOT shake it. They more or less give it a squeeze. it's kinda different.

Also, sometimes brits will say 'yea?' at the end of a sentence. for example, "You going to the party this afternoon, yea?"

something like that. Everyone in America made fun of me when I came back because I always said stuff like that haha!

I hope this helps. I don't want you to think I hate your story because I LOVE it! so cute! so please don't be offended! :) now on to chapter 5! :)
BittersweetHearts08 chapter 3 . 12/31/2009
Haha! I like Natalie! She's sweet! at least Ally found someone nice! :)
BittersweetHearts08 chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
buahahaha! knee to the groin trick! I love it! I literally went, "YES!" outloud hahah! :) I like this story! now to go on to read chapter 2! :)
WickedMissy chapter 13 . 12/25/2009
I am madly in love with this story!

*frowns* but yew talk long to update *sober*
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