Reviews for Ocean Angel
Daffodil Elizabeth chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
This is a lovely hiaku. I must agree that the tense does sound a bit off at times, but the words are so descriptive that it doesn't detract that much from the poem itself. If I were you, I'd just fix that and the poem would be great!
Awen1923 chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
Nicely written...although the word tenses are a little off in places. Still, I really liked this poem.
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
Excellent job.

Thanks for the review!

~Rowan~
Thenardier chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
This is lovely. Has a tinge of sadness, yet peace in it. The tense seems a bit weird though.
Basara chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
saddening...
The Haiku Police chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
... What?
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Vivid, and the mood is well written here. I like this.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
I love this, lovely simply imagery... however, I think the tenses need looking at - 'she now plundered down under/rested peacefully' it makes more sense (to me) if it was 'she now plunders down under/ resting peacefully'. In my opinion.

But anyway, I like it :D

Keep writing!