Reviews for The Trees Stirred
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Absolutely fantastic personification. You make the trees so animate and emotional, it's beautiful. I loved the this line in particular: "reaching long delicate limbs to brush the knotted / fingers of their patriarch." That image of the 'knotted fingers' is wonderful. Well done, well done indeed.
dalicomplex chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
cool poem. very gorgeous imagery. i like it. as in!

so, do you believe in animism? hehe. i do. :P

TeapotLid chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
Wow. And I have to reiterate: WOW. Your use of imagery and sensory details is magnificent and everything flows smoothly...amazing descriptions, excellent job! All I can think of is, to make it flow a tad bit more smoothly, to get rid of the word 'sounding' in the 7th line, to add a tiny bit more immediency...

But this is a real masterpiece, keep it up!
Lynaeve chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
I really love the images in this poem and your personification of the old tree. Nicely done.