|Reviews for A Light in the Dark|
| Nyx chapter 18 . 12/26/2008
Dang it, Nuzzy! Update already!
My popcorn's gone stale.
| wondergurl-37 chapter 18 . 6/23/2008
it's almost like you just gave up on this story.
i totally fell in love with it forever ago too.
please write something.
something good and worth-while.
we're all rooting for you.
and so is Karina.
| atreyu love chapter 18 . 1/19/2008
i dont get this chapter.
its confusing me.. lots.
lol. please update though!
im interested in more.
Mollena has def. got to be innocent.
and i think Synne is being stupid, joining the dark side.
m, and penn is a bit odd.
and damien is cute :)
haha. PLEASE UPDATE!
| witchwriter chapter 18 . 1/18/2008
yay for comic releif! so funny and it makes you wonder... what kind of person created a person like me, and who ever it was, what instition were they commited to? hehe- and I'd like to see a man faint once in a while because you're not going to see me do it any time soon. evilly sincere.
| ShadeOfNyx chapter 18 . 1/18/2008
. . .
You've gotta be -censored- kidding me!
ROFLMAO! Damien's a Southern teen now, eh?
Dang, I loved this chappie. Eh... too bad it doesn't count as a real one.
But you know... if this is the only point in the story that Karina eats something, then...
Well, that would be just sad.
The Dark side has cookies! Muahahahaha!
| CaveDwellers chapter 17 . 1/2/2008
Hey! Nice hearing from you again!
Aw man, Synne's such a dissapointment. If he ever comes back, there's gonna be hell to pay, I'm willing to bet ('scuse my French). And poor Mollenna, she doesn't know... I wonder how Damien (and possibly Karina) are gonna take the news. Haven't heard about them in a while, though I suppose there's a reason for that. The plot's much more important.
You know, I always had a feeling that Penn wasn't as bad as she seemed. This is just proof of it.
It's an interesting thing, isn't it? Obviously a man, but with feminine(sp?) tendencies. An interesting touch. No wonder people call It "it."
Sorry, can't help you with your Vegas woes. I haven't been there before myself, though I've heard that it's not much unless you can gamble.
Glad you've got your inspiration back, but I think I've commented on all I can. I didn't see any errors, either. Sorry this review isn't so great.
| ShadeOfNyx chapter 17 . 12/30/2007
This story is making less and less sense the more I read it. Oh well. I guess I'm lucky I know most of the plotline...
Hold on. Cinderella's a villian now?
Synne: For the last time, I AM NOT CINDERELLA! MY NAME IS SYNNE! SYNNE DRELLA! WILL YOU GET THAT RIGHT?
ShadeOfNyx: Shut up!
. . .
HOW ON EARTH DID HE OF ALL PEOPLE START COMING INTO MY REVIEWS?
I thought it was usually Damien...
Synne: ARGH! *goes off wailing*
SON (ticked): Would you mind shifting him into a cricket so that I can crush him?
Synne: -A-wait, what?
SON: Anytime now!
Synne: I'm leaving.
SON: Never mind then.
Synne: *pops in* But I will come back eventually to haunt y-
SON: SHUT UP! *kicks Synne out the door*
SON: Finally, he's gone. Now, where was I?
“B-Because he’s just a fairy tale… what would you want with me, anyways? J-just… let me go.”
A fairy tale?
No offense, Green Sky, but your whole story is kinda like a fairy tale (and a very demented one at that).
Hm... interesting chappie...
Aw... Molly does care about Cindy-windy...
Mollena: *blushing* I-I what?
Synne: For the last time, my name is not 'Cindy,' or 'Cinderella,' it's SYNNE!
SON: Shut up, Cindy!
| witchwriter chapter 17 . 12/30/2007
hello, wazup. so synne has joined the dark (sorta) you wanna join my dark side? we have ramen and cookies and other stuff. we have little toto too! lovely chappy. evil.
| wondergurl-37 chapter 17 . 12/30/2007
finally a new chapter!
this chapter was a little confusing...
and no Karina!
but it was good.
can't wait 4 ur next chapter!
| SilentWhisperWolf chapter 17 . 12/30/2007
great chapter! -gasp- Synne is evil! Evil!
| wondergurl-37 chapter 16 . 12/29/2007
i've been reading this story since you originally started writing it...
before you even changed the name.
it's been really amazing so far...
so update soon!
| merrymowmow chapter 16 . 12/21/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
| You know me THE KABOB chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
you better stick to these stories...you cannot write about indians WHATSOEVER! The main characters end up too much like you, you know, selfish, ignorant, short, etc...Abhiprithi is way too much like you...I respect my culture, why can't you?
| MiseryLovedHer chapter 5 . 11/10/2007
i loved it! update soon! totally hilarious!
| witchwriter chapter 16 . 11/9/2007
sorry it took me so long, I had homework and stuff. And I think Karina would accept anything after what she's been through, phh I would. how did Karina get into the tower? evilly sincere.