Reviews for A Light in the Dark
somebody chapter 10 . 5/27/2007
ooh, what was with that beginning bit?
somebody chapter 9 . 5/27/2007
cool. i absolutely love the fates! that's them, right? dang, this is so not a cliche. well, it is, but its soo original! howd you come up with this plot?
somebody chapter 8 . 5/27/2007
oh penn is so funny! and i feel so sorry for mollenna, how could you do that to her? *evil look*
somebody chapter 7 . 5/27/2007
haha, cinderella feels so so unique...

fondness for synne? don't make me laugh... but synne really should have stayed a teddy bear. he was cute then...
somebody chapter 6 . 5/27/2007
haha, synne's name is cinderella!

and a potted cactus, soo random.
somebody chapter 5 . 5/27/2007
oh hahahahahahahahahahaha! that was so so so so so so so so funny, that last line! it was like omg! okay, this is so not a cliche anymore...
somebody chapter 4 . 5/27/2007
haha, mourning over the pile of stuffing and karina saying that it sounds inviting!

woah, this is starting to be a bit different from a cliche...
somebody chapter 3 . 5/27/2007
haha, the first line was really funny. still a bit of a cliche...

and the bill gates not being the richest person on earth was funny, too. so her skin color is olive?

haha, and her mom's name is pamela andersen...
somebody chapter 2 . 5/27/2007
still cliche, but good writing. rarely any grammar mistakes, congrats! haha, and the shampoo was really, really funny...
somebody chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
seems pretty much like a cliche to me. however, will keep reading.
Nyx chapter 12 . 5/26/2007
*cringes* Why'd you have to bring Crowley into this? *shudders*

Anyways, me likey de chapiter muchos, and I don't blame you for having 12 chapters being packed into one day.

Well, one night, I guess. 'Cause you did mention in chapter 1 that it was - *clears throat* - 'that unforgiving night. The night was hot, sultry, dry, and seemed to envelop you in blankets and suffocate you, until you had no wish to move and do nothing but stay at home.'

(end quote)

But maybe the realms are in different time zones?

Anyways, loved the chapter (DAM* YOU SIRRAH! Poor Molly...), and can't wait for Chapter Twelve.

Excuse me. *zips out*

*zips in, now sporting a rabid look* I want it *snarl* NOW!

*zips out*

*zips in, now normal* Yes, well, anyways.

Haha! No Damien! Yes! The garlic worked!

Damien: Actually, Nyx, it needs a little salt. But not too shabby.

Nyx: Speak of the Devil.

Damien: Vampire, actually.

Nyx (annoyed): Next time, I line my reviews with Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough... on account that Fa- erm, Fifi doesn't eat it first. She likes that stuff.

(exit Damien)


lets.kill.barney chapter 12 . 5/26/2007
really? i never noticed. i thing the pace is going jus tfine. and aww, the cahpter was soo sad! how could you do that to mollenna? -sniffle-

anyways, u almost made me cry -again! ur such a good amazing riter! keep continuing!
lets.kill.barney chapter 11 . 5/26/2007
whoa... jennina knows damien? how? this is so mysterious! and the fates r so cool, but i dont like atropos. shes such a hag - perdon the puin!
lets.kill.barney chapter 10 . 5/26/2007
-gasp- aww, poor daud. thats so sad, u almost made me cry! her dad was so mean, but its almost like she admired him. wierd, hmm.
lets.kill.barney chapter 9 . 5/26/2007
aww poor mollenna, agani. and the meeting etween queen dad and damien is os sos o so so so so so so different but it makes them realistic!
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