Reviews for Karate Tanka
greenGalilee chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
This is a favorite of mine also. (Number two, sadly. Soccer can't seem to beat it-if you put them on the same plain, that is.)

I really like the last line-it's so very simple and true. Although you did forget to mention all the sweating, bruises, callused hands and feet, broken bones, and pain!

Good job.
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Well written and vivid. I like this a lot. Great work, well done. Keep writing.