|Reviews for One push|
| LyricsArePoetry chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
wow! This reminds me of a friend of mine who has a fake friend, who is an ex friend of mine. lol. My friend gets really annoyed with this fake friend, and I acan imagine she feels like this...but she wouldn't push...but you never know what you'd do.
I love the feeling of not realising that it was you that did it, in this poem, that is a great effect. And thankz for writing about the nails, that reminds me I really have to paint my nails...black! lol
| ziva-in-the-rain chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
Wow! Sometimes, anger REALLY gets to you. (Not you, anyone in general, of course)But its great! Good job!
| MyInspiration chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
i like this one, too. i liked how you repeated the "they weren't mine though." *appleause*
| grace haevan chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
i liked it. it was really good!