|Reviews for Forever|
| frailty chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
"because, you see,
i gave up pills and blades
and scabs and hate and
grief and smoking and
dirty obsessions just for
-Yeah, I did that for the boy I'm with... Not easy stuff.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
That is really all I have left to say.
| Countess Chocula chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
Wow...such emotion. I love the first and fifth stanzas best. Wonderful job, as always.
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
some intense emotions in this. good work
| Lemon Sorbet chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
"i’ll braid all the lies that shine like dewdrops all into my hair and wear them proudly for you to see that i keep nothing from you"