Reviews for Forever
frailty chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
"because, you see,

i gave up pills and blades

and scabs and hate and

grief and smoking and

dirty obsessions just for

you."

-Yeah, I did that for the boy I'm with... Not easy stuff.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
Beautiful.

That is really all I have left to say.

* Noelle
Countess Chocula chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
Wow...such emotion. I love the first and fifth stanzas best. Wonderful job, as always.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
some intense emotions in this. good work

keep writing
Lemon Sorbet chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
"i’ll braid all the lies that shine like dewdrops all into my hair and wear them proudly for you to see that i keep nothing from you"