Reviews for A Fragment of Beauty
C. Fitzsimmons chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
This is a good theme to play around with. I enjoy seeing the darker side of characters, and portraying beauty as something that isn't it. Nice descriptions and writing style in this piece. I can't say this as a critique, only a suggestion, but I think it would have been more effective to have Lily more outwardly social and carefree, with the darker aspect of her very hidden and only coming out in private. People who've suffered abuse and depression generally seem to hide it around others, but as I said, she's your character. It was a nice read regardless.