|Reviews for Precious Gurl|
| silentscream4luv chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
hey i really love it.. do u think maybe u could send me a message when it is done?
| Kita Tsuki chapter 11 . 4/2/2007
omg. When is she going to forgive him? Poor Sen. Poor Jordan. Update soon! Peace.
| Kita Tsuki chapter 10 . 2/11/2007
Update soon! Peace.
| Biaa chapter 10 . 2/11/2007
I always wondered what had happened to that bitchladyteacher : I KNEW she wasn't really a good person, but I thought she would've done something in the other story. hm I wonder what she's up to :P
Can't wait to read the next update!
| akaCHEEKS chapter 9 . 1/28/2007
haha i actually forgot who killed their mom. who was it again?
| Kita Tsuki chapter 9 . 1/28/2007
Jeez. I didn't think her grandmother was really important to the story. Sorry, it's just I don't really care about her grandmother. She was really mean anyway. Update soon! Peace.
| I Dance In The Rain chapter 9 . 1/28/2007
ahahahaha. so the truth is revealed. what will daddy dearest have to say about THAT, eh?
| I Dance In The Rain chapter 8 . 1/21/2007
oh dear dude. so is he gonna get sen or what? ha ha. i'm so anxious to find out! well, he probably will. the guy usually gets the girl! :) um, i just wanted to give you a pointer when it comes to your writing. you write a lot of dialogue and not enough description so sometimes it's hard to tell what the character is feeling at that time. and sometimes i get confused on who's talking. for example you could write "i can't believe you would say that to me," sen said, shock crossing her face as she tried to take in all that he had just told her. lol. i'm such a dork but yeah. i still love this story! update soon! :)
| akaCHEEKS chapter 8 . 1/20/2007
this story's getting pointless...
| Biaa chapter 8 . 1/18/2007
aw it was no problem :)
thank you for writing! i really hated that veronica girl. and i was SO mad at jordon for leaving sen that day and going to her.. but i was more mad at sen for not even giving him a chance :(
woot. i can't wait to see what happens next ;)
| Dezi E chapter 8 . 1/18/2007
I LOVE that you started to write this again! You've done pretty well on it so far! :D SO just keep it up!
| Kita Tsuki chapter 8 . 1/18/2007
Poor Jordan. Update soon! Peace.
| Biaa chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
hi, i've read all seven of your chapters a long time ago. actually i read hot gurl and when you started writing Precious Girl i was addicted. but it seems you're not writing anymore. it could be that you have lots to do or you don't know what to write or even that you're not interested anymore, but i would like to know what your plans are for this story because i really was interested in it :)
| let me scream my heart out chapter 7 . 12/3/2006
wo i get special mention lol (dont know why though) aniwayz wiked chapter and i see youve sorta gone along with my plan yey aniway i'll tlk to you tomorrow in school
p.s i got my lip pierced
| akaCHEEKS chapter 7 . 12/1/2006
wow.. she's harsh! haha but it's ok! i'm like that too! i only give one chance.. and i don't listen cause i'm hella stubborn.. then a couple of months later.. when i'm all cool with my ex.. i regret that i never did gave him another chance.. but then it's too late.. cause then they're not willing to anymore.. or sometimes it'll be too awkward and stuff...