hey i really love it.. do u think maybe u could send me a message when it is done?

omg. When is she going to forgive him? Poor Sen. Poor Jordan. Update soon! Peace.

Update soon! Peace.

I always wondered what had happened to that bitchladyteacher : I KNEW she wasn't really a good person, but I thought she would've done something in the other story. hm I wonder what she's up to :P

Can't wait to read the next update!

Goodluck!

haha i actually forgot who killed their mom. who was it again?

Jeez. I didn't think her grandmother was really important to the story. Sorry, it's just I don't really care about her grandmother. She was really mean anyway. Update soon! Peace.

ahahahaha. so the truth is revealed. what will daddy dearest have to say about THAT, eh?

oh dear dude. so is he gonna get sen or what? ha ha. i'm so anxious to find out! well, he probably will. the guy usually gets the girl! :) um, i just wanted to give you a pointer when it comes to your writing. you write a lot of dialogue and not enough description so sometimes it's hard to tell what the character is feeling at that time. and sometimes i get confused on who's talking. for example you could write "i can't believe you would say that to me," sen said, shock crossing her face as she tried to take in all that he had just told her. lol. i'm such a dork but yeah. i still love this story! update soon! :)

this story's getting pointless...

aw it was no problem :)

thank you for writing! i really hated that veronica girl. and i was SO mad at jordon for leaving sen that day and going to her.. but i was more mad at sen for not even giving him a chance :(

woot. i can't wait to see what happens next ;)

I LOVE that you started to write this again! You've done pretty well on it so far! :D SO just keep it up!

(::)

Poor Jordan. Update soon! Peace.

hi, i've read all seven of your chapters a long time ago. actually i read hot gurl and when you started writing Precious Girl i was addicted. but it seems you're not writing anymore. it could be that you have lots to do or you don't know what to write or even that you're not interested anymore, but i would like to know what your plans are for this story because i really was interested in it :)

thx!

wo i get special mention lol (dont know why though) aniwayz wiked chapter and i see youve sorta gone along with my plan yey aniway i'll tlk to you tomorrow in school

p.s i got my lip pierced

wow.. she's harsh! haha but it's ok! i'm like that too! i only give one chance.. and i don't listen cause i'm hella stubborn.. then a couple of months later.. when i'm all cool with my ex.. i regret that i never did gave him another chance.. but then it's too late.. cause then they're not willing to anymore.. or sometimes it'll be too awkward and stuff...