Reviews for Cruel Kisses |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very good! I think that the spacing is a bit off in some spots.. Example : “Oh, who’s your sire? I might now them.” Tasha took a heavy sigh. “I don’t want to talk about it.” Austin nodded, then rubbed the nape of his neck. You're putting the quote on the same line as an action that someone else is doing.. got a bit confusing :) Not hard to fix or anything, just letting you know that if you had it be something like, "Oh, who's your sire? I might know them." Tasha took a heavy sigh. "I don't want to talk about it." Austin nodded, then rubbed the nape of his neck. So yeah, just being a bit helpful :D Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm so he's slept with Kitten and in the morning not even tried to find Tasha to say sorry. Something says their relationship is going down the pan. Im intrigued as to whats in the folder... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! I don't believe Rome! Poor Tasha.. update soon. |