Reviews for Forever's A Lie
Cum grano saltis chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
good work, I really like the message!

was the line "So get busy living, or get busy dying" inspired by the song by fall out boy ?
Lacrease chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
The idea is a good one: Many people (especially those who are just introduced to the outside world) go through this. I like your technique of two different "voices." It made it sound like one is reasoning with oneself.

I liked this poem.