|Reviews for Forever's A Lie|
| Cum grano saltis chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
good work, I really like the message!
was the line "So get busy living, or get busy dying" inspired by the song by fall out boy ?
| Lacrease chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
The idea is a good one: Many people (especially those who are just introduced to the outside world) go through this. I like your technique of two different "voices." It made it sound like one is reasoning with oneself.
I liked this poem.