Reviews for Best Served Cold |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Dolphins are actually smarter than humans. And I'm not telling you this to stick up for dolphins or anything. I'm not really a fan of them. They rape people (true story) and they're just meek versions of sharks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, I was really hoping this would have been continued but it has been about 2 years since the last update so I'm betting that it's dead...? I would love to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw i got to the end and was upset! i hope u figure out what to write soon! its a great story and i really like it! maybe as an idea after the party have them end up having sex which would then lead to awkwardness the next morning and Callie being really cofused cause she wanted to go slow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this story! I hope you get some motivation to write some chapters eventually! Amazing work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW. Anger management? |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well..it was good and funny while it lasted ... :( good thing I'll know exactly when you update :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww poo...sigh, I liked this story! But blocks happen _ Do you have any really good recommendations for me to read until this one is continued? And what plot bunnies are you talking about? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I love this story! But thanks for letting us know:) and of course-i would love to read more of your stories! haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() you're planning on continuing...right? you can't just leave people hanging like that...it's pretty cruel! anyhow I like it minus the fact that is has a LOT of swear words. I don't think you realize how many there are!...well yeah I like less swear words...but continue! (that obviously hasn't stopped me from reading :P) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So glad they're finally working things out. Waiting patiently for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story -but I don't like having to re-read the whole thing just to get the gist of what's going on since the last update. All that to day...please update soon! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wtf's her problem? He just wants his coffee and it's her job. Who cares how complex it is, it's your job, he's paying. I don't understand why she was being so nosy, what's it to her? Anywho, it's off to a nice start, I just find her actions stupid, and not really well thought out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes :D thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the dialogue in this story- and particularly this chapter - is remarkable. The way you capture the awkwardness of the situation is hilarious too. I can't wait to see what's to come! |