Reviews for Best Served Cold |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i hope you get chapter 32 out quick! |
![]() ![]() Great story I enjoyed what you wrote so far. I have only two minor comments. Callie's charecter is like an exploding volcano I would never call it cold. The note is in chapter 20 you made callie wiegh 138 pounds that's almost a size eight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() go callie! i love it! she should come and meet me family; mabye she can yell some sence into them. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...Thanksgiving drama. xD Anyway, cool chapter. I can't wait for Callie's and Michael's conversation. ) |
![]() ![]() Wow, I started jumping up and down when I realized my screenname was used. Also, can we say Mr. MIke Faiola is a hottie hott hott with that hair and those scintillating eyes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() junk. that's one crazy family. but who doesn't have a crazy family, if they have one? exactly. normality is so overrated. i just want to say that i enjoy how you're including her family life in the story. i like it when the story's not just about the couple in question but also about their/the main character's life, too. at the very least it gives it more scope if not more depth. good show :D that being said...i miss michael! waiting for him to come back into our little lives outside of the televised/word-of-mouth world. but yes, please continue doing what you're doing! can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn! i thought someone would give her shit for not telling them they were dating michael! *pout* i still love it! i feel so sorry for her, i'd probably have gone psycho at the family much earlier than her. lol but thats just me. update soon! |
![]() ![]() I love this story its well written and i always look to see when its updated. Cant wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like the people you picked for the characters, they fit the bill perfectly! im so glad callie stood up to her family, great job! can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god this story is long but the first chapter was so great and if i don't read it it'll kill me. so i'll read it. yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Cliffhanger! What was this so called surprise waiting for Callie at home? Well update soon please, this is such a funny story. I love Callie's inner ice queen. |
![]() ![]() hey man, this chapter was real good! way to go authoress! but what's daddy's surprice? want to know! keep it up |
![]() ![]() WOW. I've been reading this story recently, and I can say that I absolutley love it. Do you have any pictures or any individual that you think resembles the characters in this story? Keep up the greatness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah! I can't believe that Michael. Now what is it that Daddy dearest has to surprise us with? Good job, E. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This definitely has got to be my favorite chapter. Callie's dry humor is just hilarious and I really liked the little part of the interview because now you really know how Michael feels about her. So anway, this was an uber good chapter and you are an uber good writer! Happy Easter! |