Reviews for Best Served Cold |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahahaha this is so funny yes i am rollong on the ground laughing i can't wait to see the rest of her families reaction |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story keeps me laughing so hard I feel like puking up my intestines. That's a good thing, by the way. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ha, i like this, you're sense of humor is great Chrome |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! i love it! keep up the good updates! |
![]() ![]() 'lo, ok i dunno what else to say except i love your story, i've been followng it for a while, and i realised i hadn't reviewed. so yeh... i love it. its awesome and i cant wait for when the whole rest of the family finds out about callie and micheal. lots of laughs expected there. hmm, well like i said, i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! I loved how you wrote those last five or so sentences. They were perfect for this chapter. Hahaha, poor Callie. Aw, and she's actually missing this Michael dude! So cute! So glad you updated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was definitely my favorite chapter! I was grinning stupidly by the end of the chapter, mostly because of Michael's response. Hahaha, I wonder how Callie's going to explain this to her family. Awkward. But it will be fun to read for sure. Thanks for updating! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously. I love your work. The latest chapter never fails to bring a chuckle out of me. I was seriously grinning when Rachel found out her sister's predicament (or fortune, I guess you could say). Update regularly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoah man this story is awesome! looking forward to an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a NEW READER! :P Just felt like typing that in capital letters for some odd bizzare reason that I cannot fanthom. Anyways, I love your story so far. It's funny and it's more realistic than most stories. Highly entertaining. ) Keep it up. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rockin' chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesomely kickassness! ;) |
![]() ![]() I'm totally digging the story. It's refreshingly real with all the confusing mood swings and illogical crap that falling in love entitles. I don’t really have critiques but how about incorporating the fact that Michael’s an actor and Callie’s a student more into the story? As for suggestion for a new story…I think it’d be great if you wrote a fantasy. With your realistic style of writing and humor I know it’d be awesome. I’m just so tired of boring cliché fantasy stories. I swear, if it has a princess/prince, knight/magically-all-powerful hero, dragons, and/or elves in it, I will scream! Can you write one with a fresh take to it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() wel i dont know if i reveiwed after i finished reading all the chapters but i have to say i like it alot! its a great story, im a sucker for the humor. great job and i can't wait for more! |