Reviews for Best Served Cold
ACKLAX3 chapter 46 . 12/20/2009
ah i love this story! your new story idea sounds really good:) keep up the great work and cant wait for the next chapter:D
helzyeah chapter 46 . 12/20/2009
naw! how awkward! haha. but could you please do a recap on what has been happening cause you dont update much...unfortunatly:(...and i know im not the only one who had to read like 2 chapters before this;)

and i think that story sounds good but you'll have to have someone she turns to, like maybe her boss or something. BUT im not a writer you are so...write away!

thanks for updating!
Yellow.Jellow chapter 46 . 12/19/2009
Yay! you finally updated! I had to glimpse through the last chapter because I had forgotten what happened, ha ha. Lots of dialogue here eh? It's okay though because your characters have such great voices.

And yeah, your new idea sounds super! Maybe third time's the charm? But he'll have to work super super hard to win her back for screwing her twice though... I don't know how you feel about high school settings but I'd rather not... this actually sounds like a story where the characters are definitely older, more mature, and a little more "worldly." But however you choose to write it, I look forward to reading it!
mixed signals chapter 45 . 12/10/2009
HI :D I love Callie and Michael LOL :D

Love the plot and storyline so far ;) Can't wait to read more! :) UPDATE SOON PLEASE? PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP? 8)

ACKLAX3 chapter 45 . 11/18/2009
ah i LOVE this story! i've read the whole thing since yesterday and its amazing! keep up the great work and please update soon:D
HeartsOfDiamonds chapter 45 . 11/4/2009
Interesting story so far. I'm a bit confused with Callie's mood swings, since it moves from cheerful and loving to bitter and furious. However, good job and update soon.
tehcow chapter 45 . 10/10/2009
i'm ecstatic that you didn't make them kiss and make up but rather have them do this the logical and real way :]
JZK chapter 45 . 10/10/2009
Cant wait for the next chapter. I like Michael again since hes not a complete arse.
Devilish Kisses chapter 45 . 10/10/2009
I'm glad she forgave him.
jessie0754 chapter 45 . 10/10/2009
What Nicole did was terrible! I can see where Michael is coming from, though... update soon :)
jessie0754 chapter 40 . 10/10/2009
Hey, you posted the same chapter twice... was wondering if there's actually supposed to be a chapter called "A Rush of Blood to the?" ? Anyway, onwards :D
Tra-My Hoang chapter 45 . 10/9/2009
Yay! an update! Gosh, I teared up reading this chapter, nothing like some good ol' heartbreak. I really like how you're making them work for this. Both have really good, realistic, valid reasons behind their heartbreaks that make getting to the happily-ever-ending a drama in itself. Michael sounds like a very real and down to earth guy, despite the fact that he's a famous star. I'm just having a little problem with Callie's character development. She just totally went from uber bitter and angry to love-sick-puppy-ish. I can't see where or when or how this transformation took place.

Overall, very nice!
helzyeah chapter 45 . 10/9/2009
aw why not. eveyone loves reading a good sex scene!

niec chappie btw. update son
happilynuts chapter 2 . 10/6/2009
lol sorry i just had to point out...the average dolphin is probably a lot smarter than the smartest human alive right now I AM NOT a weirdo animal activist haha but dolphins can even pick up and understand human language so yeahhaha
malloluvsya chapter 44 . 10/4/2009
Ahh, you can't leave me hanging. I'm totally confused and I need to know an outcome here. Such a great update, but now I'm a tad depressed for Callie. So please update soon.
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