Reviews for Best Served Cold |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Haha. That's some funny stuff. :D I love all her reactions. They're funn-ee. lol Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Her reaction to his call made me laugh :D Thanksgiving should be an interesting experience! Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah.. the many things you can do in a hour...lol update soon! its going very well so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whop! I'm liking the humor alot. Not many writers deliver such good, crisp lines...you prob get this alot but can you do me a fav? Read and review me story? It's only seven chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe they're a right pair. Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great stuff, cant wait to see where you take it... cheers |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay this is really good, I love how unique and interesting your character is. The only thing that I would recommend to make your story even more realistic is to introduce why Michael was interested in her in the first place. Like, he saw her bitch out a customer and was so intrigued that he decided tocome back. Or something. Other then that, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute! cant wait till the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice update! keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good job i like your writing style :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the stroy,updated soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() "BURN." LOL, I haven't heard that in forever. Thank you for making me laugh :) I enjoy Callie and Michael's conversations. They make me wish I had a hot guy to banter with, taunt, and laugh at. Keep up the good work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOT. hahah one word only! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A bit of a short chapter, but it was nice. Short and sweet, I'll say. ) Humorous, heh. Update soon? -Lqd |