Reviews for Best Served Cold
callisto jean chapter 4 . 10/29/2006
What? No actor action? Aw!

Lol. This is risignofthebluesun btw. I just changed my pen name.

Cool update! (I decided against not using great.)

Sorry, lack of sleep does this thing to me...weird...stuff...

Anti chapter 4 . 10/29/2006
Still loving this story! it's getting better for every chapter, can't wait for the next update!

thanx for updating so often btw...
addictedtwin chapter 3 . 10/28/2006
Hey Aprilsunshine,

Wow. That's a great beginning to a story. I can't wait to read more. I hope you update really soon because I'm really getting into your story. I like how Callie is a rebel in her setting and that she really stands out from those around her. Keep writing. And update really soon.
theyStoleMyPenName chapter 3 . 10/28/2006
it's a good story... although doesn't callie seem to be too angry at the world? there might be an explanation for her frequent outbursts, but as of yet, there are none. just saying. oh and why didn't michael get recognized by her whereas others did?

continue writing.)

risingofthebluesun chapter 3 . 10/27/2006
that was suuper!
Avalon Mist chapter 3 . 10/27/2006
Evil-chan chapter 3 . 10/27/2006
Oh! I love it! Please don't stop, pwease. It's really interesting and funny! Callie is a cool, kickass character. _ I'll be waiting for the next update!


floating away chapter 3 . 10/27/2006
this is amused me thoroughly. keep up the good work and please update soon!
readerrom chapter 3 . 10/27/2006
This is really good. Keep up the good work!
girl-imposter chapter 3 . 10/27/2006
I totally dig its soo funny the way she hates him with all her heart...keep updating...
Anti85 chapter 3 . 10/27/2006
i'm loving this story more for every chapter, it's very well written. and i'm constantly anxiuous to see what you do next. keep up the good work, i see a bestseller chick-flick ahead... if you avoid the clichees, that is :p
angels and effects chapter 2 . 10/27/2006
Haha, the first thing that came to my mind was that Callie has a little attitude problem. Stressed maybe, but I thought it was a tad extreme. It made me laugh though, so I really don't know what to think about it... gahs, LOL. Do you work in Starbucks or something? The content on it is pretty comprehensive. And yeah, a few grammar mistakes here and there, but it's still a funny story. God, that order in the first chapter was seriously whacko! XD I was wondering this though: how come Callie didn't recognise him, and the other patrons too? Yeah.

Oh, and the title of this should be An Ice Cold Girl, not Girls. :D

So, humorous story as a whole, update soon! It'll be interesting to see how Callie reacts when she finds out that the Evil Spawn's a famous actor, wahaha...
effay chapter 2 . 10/27/2006

I would just like to say something and that is; I LOVE your story! It is so good! This story has got potential and the way you write and your choice of words is amazing! It's a really awesome story. I really love this idea, continue with the writing please!

I cannot wait to read more!

Avalon Mist chapter 2 . 10/27/2006
Hahaha this is cute so far. God knows thats the way I feel most of the time!
Luv-TU chapter 2 . 10/27/2006
I liked it!
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