Reviews for Best Served Cold |
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![]() ![]() What? No actor action? Aw! Lol. This is risignofthebluesun btw. I just changed my pen name. Cool update! (I decided against not using great.) Sorry, lack of sleep does this thing to me...weird...stuff... bb |
![]() ![]() Still loving this story! it's getting better for every chapter, can't wait for the next update! thanx for updating so often btw... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Aprilsunshine, Wow. That's a great beginning to a story. I can't wait to read more. I hope you update really soon because I'm really getting into your story. I like how Callie is a rebel in her setting and that she really stands out from those around her. Keep writing. And update really soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's a good story... although doesn't callie seem to be too angry at the world? there might be an explanation for her frequent outbursts, but as of yet, there are none. just saying. oh and why didn't michael get recognized by her whereas others did? continue writing.) si |
![]() ![]() that was suuper! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! I love it! Please don't stop, pwease. It's really interesting and funny! Callie is a cool, kickass character. _ I'll be waiting for the next update! Luvs, Evil-chan |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is cute...it amused me thoroughly. keep up the good work and please update soon! |
![]() ![]() This is really good. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally dig this...like its soo funny the way she hates him with all her heart...keep updating... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm loving this story more for every chapter, it's very well written. and i'm constantly anxiuous to see what you do next. keep up the good work, i see a bestseller chick-flick ahead... if you avoid the clichees, that is :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, the first thing that came to my mind was that Callie has a little attitude problem. Stressed maybe, but I thought it was a tad extreme. It made me laugh though, so I really don't know what to think about it... gahs, LOL. Do you work in Starbucks or something? The content on it is pretty comprehensive. And yeah, a few grammar mistakes here and there, but it's still a funny story. God, that order in the first chapter was seriously whacko! XD I was wondering this though: how come Callie didn't recognise him, and the other patrons too? Yeah. Oh, and the title of this should be An Ice Cold Girl, not Girls. :D So, humorous story as a whole, update soon! It'll be interesting to see how Callie reacts when she finds out that the Evil Spawn's a famous actor, wahaha... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I would just like to say something and that is; I LOVE your story! It is so good! This story has got potential and the way you write and your choice of words is amazing! It's a really awesome story. I really love this idea, continue with the writing please! I cannot wait to read more! -TearsofAutumn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha this is cute so far. God knows thats the way I feel most of the time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it! |