I must say after reading the entire story in three days, i really enjoyed it.

The beginning was HILARIOS with Michael and Callie constantly bickered and then went cute and lovey dovey (but still funny) and then to the depressing moments.

The plot moves along great and isn't slow at all, but not too fast as well.

I hope you continue and i will definitly put in my favorites.

Thanks and keep writing please!

That's just so bad, and mean. It felt like he was an insensitive prick...

omg dying on edge of seat here. you know i almost gave up reading this story in the beginning b/c i really did not like callie's attitude but then i was like what the heck, give it a shot... and now im in love with it. :]

Please don't take this as a flame, because I read the storey from front to back. But I really don't like your Michael. Unless he REALLY shapes up I hope that Callie ends up with Scott. Good story otherwise.

Graydevilforever

aw poor callie.

omg! michael that arse! I dont like michael at the moment

Didn't Callie drive Jen's Audi earlier when she ditched Michael to go have a drink with Scott?

Plagarism is always a huge problem on fictionpress, but unless this 'jess' reports your stor to the fictionpress site, ad it is investigated- and then taken down- there is no proof that it was plagarized. I for one, have never read a story like this on fictionpress, and I completely believe that your story is entirely original. In fact, your story may have been plagarized by someone else, who changed the main characters names to Paul or whatvever. it might be worth you checking out, you definitely don't want anyone plagarizing your story.

This 'jess' person signed anonimously, which is highly unprofessional. She might have just wanted to flame your story.

I think you are doing a great job, please keep updating, and if 'jess' reviews again, report this to fictionpress. they may beable to track down the IP number fo the computer where the review came from, and block that particular computer from reviewing your story.

Keep writting!

-teardrop456

wow that was incredibly rude of the "jess" preson! and i very much believe there are wrong! cuz i've been following this story just about from the begining and in all the years i have been on this sight have never seen anything remotely like this story!

i'm sticking with you aprilsunshine! and thats that!

your an amazing wrighter and have unique idea's!

i hope you keep wrighting for years to come!

omg what a "insert insult" (haha I couldn't decide what to call her).

I can't believe 'Jess' accused you of plagarising. I started reading this story way back (I think when you started) and I know you have not plagarised it.

I love Callie & Michael's story - he seems like a little sweetheart ha :)

Buy yes, don't worry I'm quite certain you have a lot of people who will back you on this (I know I will).

Anyway, hope this doesn't dissuade you from writing! Cause this is an awesome story :)

I can't believe this "jess" person would accuse you of plaigarism! She totally should have sent you the original plaigarised story before she accuses you of something so serious! But, thank you for clearing everything up and calming my beating heart. For when i saw the title of this chapter, I (as well as others I'm sure) thought that you meant that this story had been plaigarized!

Sorry about the plagerism. It's an asshole thing to do and it sucks that people are that obnoxious. That person probably ripped you off anyway. Don't take it to personally cause some people in the world are just rude assholes. I really like the story, except they need to have sex. Seriously like the next chapter, lol. Also is zach gonna find out he's gonna be a father cause I think it would better if he didn't know cause he's fucking psycho.

Wow, that was interesting...

When I first received the alert of this chapter, and saw the chapter name, I was almost convinced that you meant that this story was plagiarized by someone else and you were taking it down and all that. Then I read everything :D.

catherine m.

I really like this story. It took me an hour or so just to finish it.

But this is plagiarized? Where was the original then?

WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?