Reviews for Best Served Cold
Somewhere In Between chapter 2 . 10/26/2006
ahaha im loving this story! Cal is awesome :P I also love the chapter titles haha

update soon!

Sally Can Wait chapter 2 . 10/26/2006
Well, the first chapter was a bit abrupt. I mean, her thoughts didn't seem angry enough to randomly dump coffee on the guy, but other than that, excellent. I love stories where they don't get along at first. It's just so...m.

...m is the adjective I use when I'm too tired to think of anything. But I
Trishcbury chapter 2 . 10/26/2006
rocky19 chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
love this story
S.M.G. Lynn chapter 2 . 10/26/2006
I love it! omg. lmao. It so fricking halarious. So, when will Mr. MAcho-ass get a name? ;) lmao. Update soon
Da Vinci at Work chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
Ha! Nice first chappy. I love the ending. You could elaborate more on the protagonist's bad day and write that she got pissed because the guy just left without taking his long order. Oh well. It's good all the same.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Wow, that is really funny. I hope you continue on to chpt. 2.
bookface31 chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Oh man! That's hilarious!

I really love where this is going, and you have a talent for making someone laugh. I liked when the dude screamed like a little girl. That's some comedy, there.

I would love for you to continue, and when you do, I'll be here to read! Great job! If you want, I can give more constructive criticism in the next chapter, but I thought I'd wait. Plus, I didn't really find much that needed correcting!

Keep writing!

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