That's...interesting. She seems REALLY flighty, hopefully no offense. Nice girl, but certainly flighty. And, I don't get how Lyndon would come to her after he knew that she had been with Cole. Slightly messed. Good idea, but, it seems like you're moving things too fast, and leaving out things.

I'll keep an eye on it, really funny read!

aw. Lyndon is perfect. what the hell is wrong with her? Cole's an ASS.

Okay her whole interaction with Cole seemed unrealistic. First she's like yeah he's all sexy and then she's like uh what he did to Lauren isn't right. Then she's like but he's so sexy. And then she's like but he wants me to just be his fuck buddy. It seems she's really fickle. I mean being fickle isn't unrealistic she's just too over the top fickle. Mayble down play tha a little. I also didn't like the end. She just got back from making out with Cole and then she goes and makes out with Lyndon. She seems a bit of a whore. I think you just had a little too much kissy kissy in this. I mean sometimes that happens and then sometimes there is no kissy kissy at all. I think you have a little too much. The guys are fine. They react to thing very well but Saie she doesn't seem to respond to things like I thought she might have. So her fickleness and then how much she's making out. I hope that helps but this story still has a wonderful plot idea and the characters each definitely have their own personality. Which is good. This chapter was okay and keep up the good work.

Lyndon is so adorable

like him way better

update soon :]

omg... she shouldve went with cole for 2 minutes than while walking she slaps him and demands to know what he did to lauren, and if he doesn say anything make her hit him again and run off. i feel bad for lyndon...*make sad face*

oh sadie... no. Lyndon IS perfect.

:O

But..!

Lyndon rocks. Cole is kind of weird.. (He really is. He gives off that, "I'm going to bust out in song in a few minutes! Beware!" vibe.) Lauren is cool, too. Chris is kind of.. mah. Brianna is gay. :[ Bridget is...well, I'm working on her. :3

But they all make this story so wonderful! I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon, please?

:3

- Negative in Everyway

Is she retarted or what. This story is pretty good. Some things the characters say and do seem unrealistic and events seem a little dramatic but other than that you are a good writer and make an enjoyable story to read.

O.M.G... YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!

OUCH!

that's gotta sting.

well, all i can say is:

Sadie - NO! GO BACK!

make her go back saying she forgot something!

Sadie & Lyndon - who cares how weird his name is?

anyways, good chapter all the same.

izzie

Oh Sadie...believe the asshole!

and what kind of name is Lyndon anyways?

Seriously - where did u get that?

I've heard it before, it's familiar, i just can't place a face.

Other than that, good story, cute dog, Cole sounds creppy, so does that shortcut home.

izzie

Oh boy! SHE SUCKED FACE WITH COLE! how dang sexy, but if what Lyndon said is true, then he is a jerk. HURRY WRITE MORE!

ohho, what is it that lauren knows and we dont? are they exes? Is he a player? i wanna know!

I dont like him anyways, Lyndon is hot and sheneeds to get over that he was mean to her. really.

this is really good... i mean REALLY good! please keep going, i like this lyndon guy, but NOT the cole guy he seems like some stupid jackass

Wow. Talk about lust and stupidity and selfishness, and blindness. i guess anyone would be real giddy if a hot, perfect person asked them out. By 'them', I also refer to me! Tee hee! :D