Reviews for Meine Liebe Akt II
granity20 chapter 13 . 5/16/2013
i really love this and the story before this too!
thanks so much for this!
Jj Smith chapter 12 . 2/19/2011
I read this about a month ago and so did my friends and this is the book i compare everyother one to and the characters are easy to fall in love with and i certainly have since i can practly resite the whole story
Joanna C. Rice chapter 12 . 6/25/2010
told you i would read it. its good the link on your site dosent work r you still writing?
Expressing-The-Unexpressable chapter 13 . 6/1/2010
i love this series...its bloody cute ;)

keep up the awesome work!
krystal-of-hope chapter 10 . 3/17/2009
yay review 100 please try and work on the other parts of meini liebe this about the third time I'm reading both parts :)

I love it please continue
nameless chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
The whole time I was reading Meine Liebe thinking, she should write one in his POV.

I love him! (Such a little anti human bookworm myself.)
Switch chapter 13 . 10/13/2007
Hey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out! _
ArvelAmaya chapter 12 . 7/11/2007
I really enjoyed this story. I guess I just liked the messed up characters the most. Kaleb was definitely a favorite of mine. The pace was fast so I finished it pretty quickly.
Satan'z Myth chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Geez... so I *did* mis-spell Kaiser's name **stupidity prevails**

And, anyway... YOU SHARE MY SISTER'S BIRTHDAY ! Only, I guess that you were born in '89, and she in '90... :D... Omg, am so excited that am practically frantically running around my room !

Anyway... geez, all these German siblings are like so cool... tho' I don't seem to like either Khevin or Rica much (no clue why :D)... but, basically, am officially in LAABH...err... LOVE... with both Kaiser and Kael - too bad am a girl *sniff* but, heyy, I've always liked the gay/apparently gay ones better ! :D
Taryn chapter 13 . 3/3/2007
Wow. I read your Meine Liebe and Akt 2 of it. Very nice job, I love your writing styles and you feel like you can get into the character, like real life. I can't wait for Meine Liebe Akt I and IV to be finished or started to read them.

It's hard to find such good written stories like this now a days. I just loved reading these though. Especially the angst. You can't have a good romance without angst.

Thank you so much for taking your time just to write these aweomse stories :]
Shindo Shuichi chapter 13 . 12/12/2006
Wow...! I love this story too! Though their lives are so screwed up, they still love eachother. I love your writing, and I can tell that it is getting alot better as you write more! I can't wait until I read Meine Liebe Akt I! But that will wait until tmrw as to how I read this so late, I dunno! I love this series and hope that you write much more.

Shindo Shuichi!

Nyu
moon maiden of time chapter 12 . 12/10/2006
This story made me hurt. It was sad and painful, but at the end, you tied it up quite nicely. And happily.

You might want to get a beta, though, 'cause you've got a lot of small grammar mistakes. (Don't hurt me for the suggestion, please.)
Reiko atsuka chapter 3 . 12/3/2006
Yay! I finally got around to creating an account, so now I can add you to fav authors, and the story to fav stories -

Donovan and Weed seem like an interesting couple... it's not often that you'll find someone who'll shut up just cause their lover tells them to, lol.

There are a few things that could be corrected...

'...who I swear have to be contacts,...'

'who' should be 'which'. 'who' is used in reference to a person, not an object.

'I exchanged a coldly look with the black haired guy.'

'coldly' should be 'cold'

'I gave Hunter a sharply glance when I said that, and his eyes narrowed.'

'sharply' should be 'sharp'

There was also one towards the beginning of the chapter... there's really nothing wrong with it, except it's a little awkward and should probably be rephrased.

'I had never seen such dark and coldly, and yet so penetrating that I felt they could look right into my soul eyes.'

It seems to that you should put 'eyes' more towards the beginning of the sentence, like: 'I had never seen eyes so dark and cold, and yet so penetrating that I felt they could look right into my soul.'

Rei
Rei chapter 2 . 11/30/2006
I like how well you show Kael's thoughts, they aren't really clear, and seem to go around in circles, which is really how most people think anyway... it really brings him to life. You've really got a knack for putting people in your characters shoes, and making them life like.

'...laughing and he care so much for River that he would do anything to please him.'

'care' should be 'cares'

"Sure thing, Mrs. Schwartz," River said with a wryly smile.

'wryly' should be 'wry'

'Well, I guess that’s better than having here in here.'

I think you meant 'her in here.' instead of 'here in here.'

'my thoughts messed over and over.'

this didn't make much sense to me, I don't think 'messed' is the correct word...

'...and I always cowered it up with makeup so no...'

I think 'cowered' should be 'covered'
Rei chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
Good chapter, doesn't exactly grab ones attention, but still really good.

I don't see any grammar errors either -

Sorry it's taken me so long in getting around to read this, it's been on my mind, but I've had so much homework that I haven't had much free time online.

Rei
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