Reviews for Order of Scions
Moonlight24 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
I like this poem it's very mystifying. It kind of reminds me of Lord of the rings. Its errie. I love it!
Penguins and Popsicles chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
Hm... Is the complicated language a science fiction thing? I seem to see that in a lot of science fiction stuff.

Very good rhyme scheme, but a simple piece of advice... Your word choice seems a bit forced. Simplistic language can make a good poem as well. But, overall, it's a nice little piece.