|Reviews for Just you and I|
| ending your life with one glar chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
i thought the same thing with my bf bt it didnt work
good work keep wrighting
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
I like the repetition of this, and the flow is good. The poem naturally follows through a story, which is nice. Maybe some punctuation would help the rhythm? I don't know.. hmm... well anyways, nice piece! Keep writing...