Reviews for My Mother
mobman chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
I love what you did here... how you drew the picture without really coming right out and stating a topic. It's like drawing a silhouette and expecting the reader to fill in the character, truely brilliant... keep it up
morbid-fantasies chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
This kinda reminds me of that new MCR song "Mama". I like this, I really do. You've got something here, mon ami.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
My heart goes out to you. The voice that you've used in this makes the situation identifiable and vivid for the reader. Very well written.
The Anarchist Abendroth chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
Wow, that was intense. Thst's a rough story to tell, and one amazingly done. I love the rawness in it. There's no perfect, pristine scheme. It just flows right through your soul. Write onwards.
Meikouhaikitsune chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
*highfives you then hugs you* YOU ROCK! 0_0 *bookmarks poem* Only because i can relate. cept I started at nine. and my brothers 7. BUt if your poem is true and I don't doubt it's not YOU ROCK!