Reviews for A Bedtime Story
Amethyst Lin chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Chills went down my spine with the Silhouette said, "Want to go for a walk?"

Hahaha, definitely not something to tell little children! What a vividly scary tale!
seventhchords chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
I thought that you could've made the story better by throwing in more descriptions to make it a little scarier. But overall, I enjoyed the plotline and found it a very good read. Keep writing!
M3741 W1NG5 Alex chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
It's a good story, it's creepy but I didn't find it that scary. Maybe if you used more adjectives to make the scene clearer it would have been more frightening. Overall I enjoyed reading this, I like the style it was written in. You have an interesting voice as a writer.
Markus Tajuya chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
Pretty nice. But it's not that scary. Good try though :)
yellowStar chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
that was okay. hehe.. not very scary.. but the twist was good. nice story. )