Reviews for Mascara Stained
M3741 W1NG5 Alex chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
It's quite similar to your other poem "Mascara Stained and Feral." Between the two I think I like this one better. I like the rhyming you use, it sounds natural and almost accidental.
JenBrat chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
I'll say it again: You are very good at capturing emotions and mood. 'A nightmare lost in a dream'. Love that image, that concept. And to use the image of finding peace in 'in your grave', rather than the cliche of finding peace in death was perfect.
someoneuninteresting chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
"youre a nightmare, lost in a dream"

I realy like that. nice.
Frore chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
I like the dark imagery of this. I've always been a fan of these kinds of poems, the ones that are somehow inspiring of death. Keep writing!
Shadows in the Fire chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
Man, I have felt like this before! I love your discriptions and LOVE the line "Now among the bones of ghosts".

What would the bone of a ghost look like, I wonder?

:) Happy writing! Keep it up!