|Reviews for Mascara Stained|
| M3741 W1NG5 Alex chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
It's quite similar to your other poem "Mascara Stained and Feral." Between the two I think I like this one better. I like the rhyming you use, it sounds natural and almost accidental.
| JenBrat chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
I'll say it again: You are very good at capturing emotions and mood. 'A nightmare lost in a dream'. Love that image, that concept. And to use the image of finding peace in 'in your grave', rather than the cliche of finding peace in death was perfect.
| someoneuninteresting chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
"youre a nightmare, lost in a dream"
I realy like that. nice.
| Frore chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
I like the dark imagery of this. I've always been a fan of these kinds of poems, the ones that are somehow inspiring of death. Keep writing!
| Shadows in the Fire chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
Man, I have felt like this before! I love your discriptions and LOVE the line "Now among the bones of ghosts".
What would the bone of a ghost look like, I wonder?
:) Happy writing! Keep it up!