|Reviews for Leave Me Here to Die|
| Krowhop chapter 9 . 11/14/2009
(Just finally read this last bit) Good to know there is some small resolution at least... I am glad that you are still writing, and I look forward to reading your revised work. _
| Sybil Fury chapter 9 . 2/4/2008
Very nice. I think all readers were just waiting for Raine and Christian to finally be reunited. I think it was a wonderful reunion. Love the story. keep creating and kudos for whatever you may write hereafter.
| AJS chapter 9 . 1/10/2008
Aw, but I liked the original version of Leave Me Here to Bleed as well. Christian finally knows! I'm so happy! I think I'll just have to go back and start rereading this whole thing again to get back into the mood of it - it's been so long since I've read this, though I remember all of the characters and everything still, which is amazing but not really surprising considering how much I loved your story :) Thank you for updating with this chapter! Is this really the Chapter 9, or is it supposed to be just a treat that was supposed to come later but you're posting it now? One thing that was kind of eh was Christian's accent. I mean I know you're trying to portray his accent through your story, but I kind of liked it when it just was just regularly spelled and everything, which left the readers free to add it or not on their own. For some reason it almost made Christian and Raine feel more distanced from each other, which put me at a slight disease while I was reading this story.
Other than that, it's great. Nathaniel sounds adorable :) I'll have to go back and relook at all of those lovely drawings you drew again. Hehe I think it's so cute that Christian loved the rubber duckie blanket. Him AND his son are just way too damn adorable :) Love them a LOT. Thanks for this chapter! It's kind of a bummer that we'll have to wait, but I really really do look forward to seeing you continue this story once you have all of LMHtB posted up and edited again. Keep up the good work!
| CITPPP chapter 9 . 1/7/2008
YESH! I LURVE IT! total hallelujah moment. lovely chapter, what the hell do you have to be insecure about in this chappy? chris ist so cute as a new father!
while i'm crying tears over the stoppage of LMHtD I'm excited for LMHtB...EDITED! not that the original wasn't superb but a tweaked version 'll be exciting.
woops, i mean W00T.
| Singing for Absolution chapter 9 . 1/7/2008
oh! I feel much better now. Knowing that they get back together. (though I kind of already knew from the site) ah. now we have to wait until you are able to finish editing, and post another chapter, but I am content for now. hm...I'm not quite sure what else to say, but eh...good writing. (damn this non english keyboard...it is making my typing abilities crap). Cheers!
| neverliveindoubt chapter 9 . 1/7/2008
Thank you so much for this! I guess this would be your last chapter? Oh well, I loved LMHtB and LMHtD so It was worth staying 'til the end. Thank you again!
| A.V.Mackie chapter 9 . 1/7/2008
That was absolutely amazing. I actually cried when Raine first said "Christian", that was such a powerful momment and the whole damn chapter was just so perfect, I could see it all in my head, Christian's expressions and little Bogdan Nathaniel's movements. I'm so happy you put this chapter up, it was amazing to read and you should be very happy with it, it was just so good. Now I'll have to go back and start reading LMHtB again, I've been holding off on reading it again since you started rewritting just after I finished reading the original. But now I want to go back and start again, see it as you reshape it and make it even better, though I have no idea how you can do that, it was damn good originally!(Praise :D Praise)
| SaraLuffsYou chapter 8 . 11/24/2007
This is great so far! Kudos for Christian kicking ass. I love the jokes. I can't wait for more. I'll be going nuts waiting. Keep writing, please! )
| A.V.Mackie chapter 8 . 11/24/2007
Dagnabit! I couldn't resist reading what you've written of the sequel, and even if I don't get my Philo essay done in time, it was totally worth it. Utterly brilliant so far and I only expect even more high quality chapters to appear...eventually. I dunno if you're still writing this actually, you don't seem to have updated in quite a few months, but I'm hopeful. I know you ask your readers to suggest what they'd like to see in the story or what they don't like, but I never like doing that, it always feels like I'm trying to change someone else's story to what I want it to be. Heh, and to be fair whenever I was reading your story and thought you'd do one thing you go another way and its better than what I had thought of, so I'll stay quiet and let you keep pumping out the quality work. :)
| Singing for Absolution chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
yes, yes, yes, i do realize i just reviewed. but as i am wishing for an update, you CAN expect me to be excited. i have very little paticence. ugh! when is he going to find out about his kid! ah! i am to excited! hehe...anyways. please, for the love of the atheistical gods, update soon! Cheers! -Cydonia
| LifeisCereal chapter 8 . 10/31/2007
I love this book and am crying inside that you haven't had time to work more on it. Just letting you know your loyal fans/readers are still here.
| Ragnarok chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
I think Creator down there pretty much summed up the question we've all been wondering. /
| RexyB chapter 8 . 10/2/2007
Btw im PMSing so this is the nicest thing i have said all day.
That was awesome this is so going on the favourite stories list
| BlueHarpy chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
I just finished reading Let Me Bleed and I was so excited to learn there was a sequel. I truely love your writing. If any of your books get published; I will be one of the first ones to run to buy it!
| Essie chapter 8 . 9/15/2007
hey! i actually liked your birth scene. it wasnt stereotype hollywood movie (us. i fastforward those scenes). when i read i visualise so just the right amount of edge of your seat action, gore & miracle of life for me.
also want to tell you i like marry (the psycho crazy one). glad you didnt kill him off.
hm, also there were gaps in the first story at the beginning but lo & behold i kept reading & my questions were answered. yay! a smart writer. pls update soon.