|Reviews for Trapped Inside|
| myheartiswaypastbeating chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
Great description, I am putting this in my favorites.
| temerity chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
WOW. Very, very interesting. Very, VERY well written. You've outlined a strong, two-dimensional character here, and that is hard to do.
Always write on :)
| SilentRiver chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
I like the way you relate this "darkest side of heaven" to all of us trapped inside our minds. There was only one place the poem seemed to stumble, and that was the line "elegance hides the torn she carries". Maybe you meant it, but I think you could put a word in between "torn" and "she" to make more sense.
It was really beautiful and hope you keep writing!