|Reviews for Freedom|
| Lyra Pocaterra chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
Me again, soz. I love that poem! I've been writing poetry about freedom, justice etc and this poem seems great. I dont fully agree on your views on religion, but the rest is great, keep the good work up.
| Ridingtherails chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
good job, u took the vocab comment into consideration. well done, sounds cool, sounds a bit like a song with the repeated part, kinda like a chorus.