Reviews for A Moment of Smiles
Kaida chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
The simplicity of the moment is really good here. I envisioned my girlfriend's smile when I read that and it made me happy. Thanks for lightening my day!
OnceADreamer chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
Aw, so sweet. I like the format of the poem. it'd different but it works.
x account closed x chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
aw :)

love moments like those.

also the structure of this, it was intresting. can't pinpoint it, but i can say it's something i haven't seen on FP before (which trust me, is a lot).

congrats on an awesome poem :)