Reviews for Within and Without
Chuck chapter 22 . 2/29/2008
I have just completed this story and overall, it's a great story, but you might want to go back through it and edit it again. More than once in more than one chapter, you got names confused, some of wich weren't even in the story. Still though, a good read.
Emote Control chapter 9 . 9/21/2007
Good story, nice characters. Only complaint is the continuity error in this chapter - how would Ashley's (still unnamed) foster mother know that Ashley killed Murphy? As far the police and parents know Ashley got away and later on the car crashed. Ashley killing him isn't something they know.
SpawnMeister666 chapter 22 . 7/2/2007
I'm not sure what I think of this ending. It all seems a little anti-climactic to me...

Spawny
PurpleEyesOfTruth chapter 22 . 6/27/2007
Er... is it the end of the chapter thingy or is it the end of the series? If it's the latter one, wow.. that was kinda un- expected...
Keja Toshiro chapter 22 . 6/27/2007
dont we get an epilogue?
viki-violet chapter 22 . 6/27/2007
this story was great. keep up the good work and writing. i wish that there was more.
PurpleEyesOfTruth chapter 21 . 6/22/2007
Wow, I love your story. So tense and exciting. Keep it up!
viki-violet chapter 21 . 6/20/2007
this story is great. i hope it is not over. keep up the good work and writing.
Keja Toshiro chapter 19 . 5/23/2007
imma go ahead and agree with paul. Shes bitter.
SpawnMeister666 chapter 18 . 5/10/2007
Curioser and curioser, as someone once said...

Tis a very strange tale, and one that I may be too sober right now to truly appreciate!

Spawny
Keja Toshiro chapter 18 . 5/9/2007
haha this one seems alot more in sequence with the story
Keja Toshiro chapter 17 . 5/1/2007
this was kinda random...
Keja Toshiro chapter 16 . 4/17/2007
ahh man! I wanna keep reading but you need to post for that to happen. Cmon now, dont make me beg .
SpawnMeister666 chapter 16 . 4/17/2007
Interesting developments. It's a bit choppy in places, but apart from that it's okay.

Spawny
SpawnMeister666 chapter 15 . 4/9/2007
Hm...

Very interesting update, if more than a little strange!

Spawny
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