Reviews for Mascara Stained And Feral
M3741 W1NG5 Alex chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
Wow, you're a very talented poet. I love the title, and these lines were my favorite: "They were there when I killed you/But absent when I took your life." Vague and vivid at the same time.
NothingMoreNothingLess chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
Damn. This is beautiful.

I think the only thing that could make it better is the lines:

"The lyrics to your favorite song/Are inscribed here in blood"

I love the lines themselves, but I think it would flow better if it was "your blood" or "my blood"... something like that.