Aaaargh! Cliffhanger! *rageface*

Wow... I was not expecting that plot twist, but it was very well implemented. I can't wait to read more of this.

:)

One thing that I appreciated in this story was the work that you put into making all of the characters have different personality traits and flaws. I found that every characters had a great amount of depth to them and it was a joy to read. Some stories, every character is basically the same person. It gets boring after a while. Thank you for this amazing read!

u had better finish this or i will hunt u down! plz and thanky uz!

This story was keeping me on the edge of my seat the whole time i was reading! everything kept me in suspense at what would happen next and i was in complete shock at the mention of Paris dying! but when he came backed to life i was relieved man and i thought kelly and paris weren't going to succeed killing aries. god i hate him : and at the end where dion and trevor were finally together again but then freaking satan had to go kill him! GAH! D: and i REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN between dion and trevor now that he's 18. MAN! what a cliffhanger!

Where is the sequel? You said it'd be out 'soon' over a month ago!

A month is not 'soon' for me.

I don't mean to be rude or anything, but I'm an impatient person.

And I have to know if Trever and Dion get back together.

Trevor simply CAN'T be straight!

OMMG this is a freaking awesome story! i love dion! shmexxyy demon god he sounnds delicious

ROFL

anyway update soon i loved it!

I loved the story! Sorry I haven't review this whole time but i just couldn't stop pressing the next button I was so hooked D.

I'm guessing there is going to be a sequel? Well, good luck -

I love this story! It's well written and the characters are great. And I can't wait for a sequel...if there is a sequel (I'm thinking there is one, because of the bit at the end).

Oh, and if there is going to be a sequel, would you please update this story when it is up? Otherwise I wouldn't catch it...thank you!

Heya

I absolutely LOVE this stpry... it is by far one of the most AWESME ones iv'e reaad in a while...

Seriously, if this doent continue... as in finding out what happens with Dion and Trevor im gonna die! How does he have a kid... or did he fall in love. Lols, well either way I can't Wait!

If the next one is even half as good as this one it'll be twice as good as some of the stuff people write(no offence intended to anyone... im just a bit hypo)

Anyways.. digression much...

I really hope you write a sequel... or get it out... either way!

Thankies anyways...loved the story...(obviously lols)

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Hey!

First of all this story is great! a little confusing at times, but it has a fantastic plot and I love the characters.

Btb, what's up witht the last thing? does trever have a kid? its strange, but hey, cant hep but love it!

hope the next chapter comes out soon!

THANKS!

What a great story! I can't wait for the sequel! Upload it as soon as you can.

HOLY FUCKING CRAP.

He can't just DIE...

Holycrapholycrapholycrap. Is he MARRIED? To a GIRL?

In the next one I mean.

If Dion and Trevor don't get back together I think I'll die. Seriously.

A fucking heart attack

Oh, excellent story by the way. You're characters take on a life of their own, and I'm sure your entire audience instantly fell in love with the adorable couple. I know I did.

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But seriously, how could Trevor ever get over losing Dion and just...

God. I can't wait for the sequel.

Well THAT came outta the blue! Meet Trevor: manbitch. Poor guy's being hopelessly dominated all over the place... and not in the good way, either...