Reviews for four leaf clovers
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
Love your poems, adding you to my favs list.
myno chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
I saw that your old account was empty. So glad to have found you again.

This is a lovely poem, and I've only one suggestion, which you may or may not agree with:

i ached when he smiled,

a shattered happy birthday of a grin,

coloring us pink and white.

It's a rhythm choice, and you may prefer how you originally had it.
x account closed x chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
i sounds trippy, almost real like, cool.

like this one a lot.

you rock :)
dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
i love the ending. it's cute and the imagery carries well throughout.
polka dots and addictions chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
I don't know what it is about this poem, but i think you've written it beautifully. The way it tells the story is just so simple and yet so powerful/

"i ached when he smiled,/a shattered happy birthday of a grin,/that coloured us pink and white." I particulaly like that stanza. Nice work, keep writing. ~Bex xx