aww thats so cute:D he's such a good brother:) agian, i think you couldv made it longer but its still good:D update soon!

whoa. that was a shock. everything was going so well and then... wow. realy unexpected. and realy good, i just wish it were a bit longer! so, i have a question. did Katy or Olivia write this? or did u guys write it together..? lol either way, its really good! update soon!

Aw... *tear* This is good. I thought it might be a typical kid-found-his-parents-died-in-a-car-crash thing, but it's a lot deeper. It's realistic, and in general it sounds good. It looks like the start of a good story. Keep on going.