Reviews for Dear Planet Earth
Starblaster1234 chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Font change...

Actually to tell you the truth the font change really made the last part stick out (because it was bold none-the-less).

Editor remarks: (If these were ment to be there, then...well I found it P)

The line starting with "Never feeling..." there is a comma after stand, not a period. (also the A in and is capitalized)

Also, it is probably your writing style but none of the series of commas have a comma before the and (which is common in books...don't know about poems)

Overall, great poem. Looks at our world in a way never seen before. I enjoyed reading this one.
Alyssa's Attic chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Brilliant I loved the last couple of lines, well done - Alyssa