Reviews for Winged |
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![]() ![]() Loved the story. It was unique, interesting and adorable! |
![]() ![]() Aha. There's Lucan. I was just starting to wonder. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! Grace and Lucan's story is fantastic! The whole plot is amazing, you should publish it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() My god Brian, hes like my god this is so inspiring. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Fantastic story by d way. Ar u going to write a sequel 4 brian and jnx? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story for many reasons! I felt like the plot was very original and the way that things were described was wonderful and felt very realistic even though the plot wasn't very realistic. The characters were very well portrayed and fleshed out. I thought the pacing of the story was done very nicely as well as the romance. There were some grammatical errors but nothing too bad. Overall I really liked this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING STORY. I loved it so much. It was beautifully written, beautifully composed and not a single second was boring! From beginning to end, I was literally HOOKED. Brilliant piece of storytelling and literature. You rock :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH! fantastic technique used to write abt the doctor's arrival! it's LOADS better than the usual "a doctor appeared" or something along those lines. i like the slow intro of parts of the doctor, n the emphasis on the colour white. n heh. glad to know bri's fine! the scene where she meets her old neighbour and the old lady traces her face is BEAUTIFUL. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! NO HOW COULD U KILL HER BEST FRIEND OFF? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehe you spell colour like british people. im so amused right now...hehee. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! This story was so good I'm hyperventalating! It's so good! At first I thought Brian and Grace were pretty cute together, but Grace and Lucan are so perfect for each other! Ok, end of fangirl moment... Your plot was amazingly unique and structured; also the dark themes of 'Angels' and 'Demons' was great! And no grammar/spelling errors! You are too awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story very much :) It could have been longer though. Anyway, I love that you came up with the idea about the winged people. It makes the story unique. Well done :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Factory? Expiraments? Wings? okay.. a lot like maximum ride... still like it though :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm even though this is only the beginning, i still like it.. sounds interesting.. and white coats? sounds familiar (MR) anyway.. don't mind me if you don't like me. i tend to overthink everything. LOVE UR WRITING THOUGH. _ |