Reviews for Vampire Heart
Narc chapter 2 . 1/6/2007
I have to say I was a little turned off by the info dump at the beginning, but this chapter was wonderful, especially considering it's a nano novel and was probably written rather hastily. I love the setting; it's very original compared to most vampire novels. I always enjoy reading other nanoers' works on fictionpress.
Sindra chapter 1 . 11/1/2006
That was awesome! You have a great way of telling us the main idea without making it boring. Ypu have a great idea and I enjoyed reading it alot! I love the show "Buffy the Vampire Slayer" so this sounded like it, which made me enjoy it even more. I like how it shows how the vampires live, instead of the humans. I would like a tad bit more detail though. I always love detail! Detail always helps the reader comprehend and understand the writings and the author better. Keep up the great work!
TaleForge chapter 1 . 11/1/2006
Not a bad start, I must say. You definintely got the general synopsis down, however it seems most of those were self-explanatory...

I's love to hear more from you, Mr/s. GreenDayFan. Write more, peace.