Reviews for Lifetime
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Good piece, perfect for the subject. I like the last couple lines best of all.
please chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
i really like this poem, and not just because i need it for a project. it's very good in and of itself. if i had a log in thingy i would put it on my favorites, but sadly i don't. so i'll just do this...

THIS POEM ROCKS!

THIS POEN IS THE BOMB!

WOLFY IS AN AMAZING POEM WRITER!

WOLFY IS AMAZING AT WHATEVER THE FLIP SHE WATS TO WRITE!

I LOVE THIS POEM!

THIS POEM IS !

THIS POEM IS FANTASTIC!

THIS POEM IS WONDERFULLIES!

D bye, wolfy.
With Rhyme and Reason chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Good, the last line especially. You manage to keep the elegance in your poetry, even though the subject risks descending into that Hell know as the cliche category. But yeah, that last line is really, really good.