Reviews for Dramatic Irony
boys kiss girls chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
This is awesome. The rhyming really helps the flow. I love the descriptions and the ironies. Reminds me of Vegas in a way.
strawberry memories chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
i really like the way this flowed. your form of sound lets the reader know that they are in good hands.

raspberry twirl

p.s. thank you for your review!
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
I love the feeling in this, this is very well written. I really liked this poem a lot. "when I'm not losing wars

I'm choosing wrong sides". Nice lines. Great work, keep writing. Thanks for reviewing my haikus too.