Reviews for Ache
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Good God, the imagery in that was potent. I seriously saw a soul rip arpart a human being and craw out of their eye sockets. Ick. But cool.

You should write more poems like this...and maybe you already have, but I don't know. I'm still going through your collection and reading. I hope there's more like this.
Bri Neves chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
Wonderful. I could really feel the emotion in it.

I especially loved this:

"Here is my sorrow

Shall I shape it for you?

Make it more palatable?

It is raw

And breathing

And alive

As it crawls out of me

Through my eyes

And my tormented gasps

More alive then I am

As it cracks me open

And seeps from my eyes"
prinsesa bibe chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
wow..

that was..

WOW.
karone-sakura chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Very interesting. I really liked it.
justaguy chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
I had to stop and say something to you about "Ache." I am having one of those weeks. I ache. I have the tears, but they are at the gates of my eyes. I am straining to keep them inside, where they belong. I am afraid to let them go. If I let them have their way, I might not ever stop. Then...what if someone thinks that I am crazy and they try to send me away.

All because I ache.

You are one of my favorite authors. You often say what I feel. Thank you.
Liebchen Rose chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
Wow...just..wow.