|Reviews for Ache|
| DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Good God, the imagery in that was potent. I seriously saw a soul rip arpart a human being and craw out of their eye sockets. Ick. But cool.
You should write more poems like this...and maybe you already have, but I don't know. I'm still going through your collection and reading. I hope there's more like this.
| Bri Neves chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
Wonderful. I could really feel the emotion in it.
I especially loved this:
"Here is my sorrow
Shall I shape it for you?
Make it more palatable?
It is raw
As it crawls out of me
Through my eyes
And my tormented gasps
More alive then I am
As it cracks me open
And seeps from my eyes"
| prinsesa bibe chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
| karone-sakura chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Very interesting. I really liked it.
| justaguy chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
I had to stop and say something to you about "Ache." I am having one of those weeks. I ache. I have the tears, but they are at the gates of my eyes. I am straining to keep them inside, where they belong. I am afraid to let them go. If I let them have their way, I might not ever stop. Then...what if someone thinks that I am crazy and they try to send me away.
All because I ache.
You are one of my favorite authors. You often say what I feel. Thank you.
| Liebchen Rose chapter 1 . 11/2/2006