Reviews for To Pinch a Player
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooope chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
aw i love it! great job! i kinda knew in the back of my mind that was gonna happen... haha :D but yea! great story!
The Professionals chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
One of the cutest stories on Fictionpress! Becca is so adorable even if she is a little clueless and I love the twist at the end!
Dustland chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
bwahahahahahaha :D
Celia Dwyn chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
This was amazing to read. It was fun and clever. No grammar and/or spelling errors (that I saw, at least).

Your characters were believable, even though Becca was slightly Mary Sueish, but in this case it's not a bad thing.

I don't think this story would have worked if Becca's character had been different. I loved the humour you used for example

"“I’m pregnant and you’re the father.”" part and little earlier Becca's to-do list(and so on. There's no point to me name all the parts I loved since I'd probably end up quoting most of the fic. And that's a compliment!).

I really don't have anything bad to say about this, and I'm not going to start making something up (;

So I'll just thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of creativity with us and go thank my friend for recommending your story.

quotata chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
i love this story. it's a fantastic, feel good story.
White Rose Blossom chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
Utterly adorable! Loved it :D

Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
I kinda wish we had seen more of Becca and Ricky together, but this was really cute and stuff and I am way too tired to type an eloquent review, haha. Anyway, I loved it, and I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
I wished we could see more interaction between Ricky and Rebecca though.. Hahaha nevertheless, it was pretty well-written! :D
blubbfreak chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
i guess reading something like that is the best way to start a day. thanks for sharing
Veronica Kimble chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
gah! that was the most adorable thing ever! your amazing at writing! keep up the awesome work!
DLETE THIS OLD chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
awesome story! it's all sweet and stuff :)
I Murder on Impulse chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
aw...I'm such a sucker for these stories!

Love it!

anitsirK chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
Fantastic! Just the perfect read to brighten up your day! :)
TwinkleHeart chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
productofdreams chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Wow... this was really, really good. I'm glad that she ended up with Ricky instead of Callum. I kinda figured that he was jealous, although you could've went into his character a little more. Still, it was very nice and like most of your stories I enjoyed it. I only say 'most' because I haven't read them all yet, but I think they'll be very good.

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