Effing awesome! I loved it soo soo much! Just one thing that needs fixing. You refer to Callum as Carson in one of the earlier paragraphs but other than that... wow! Superbly done. I'm going to go reread it now. Tootles!

wow this was a brilliant story that i loved so much! i especially loved the ending it was so wonderful! the whole way through i was hoping that ending would happen and i loved it!

ah. This was kinda good...ish. Her brother's name changed quite a bit in the beginning. One thing that kinda (irk?) something i didnt like was how this was kinda a short story, but it had most of the qualities of a normal long chaptered story. All in all, this might have been a good long story with detailed moments.

Cute. But I'm not going to go all Madame Bovary and crash and burn. That'd be pretty bad. :[

OH MY GOSH! You had me on the edge of my seat! You had my face glued to the computer screen! Freakin hell, woman! That was amazing! I loved that story so much! You are my idol! That was stuper amazing! My gosh! Thank you soo much for writing such an awesome story! Write more like that, that was so amazing! I feel like i'm gunna squeal! I LOVE YOU! That was soo cool! GAH!

Ricky is so sweet! haha that was so cute. (: it was pretty interesting too, albeit a little cliched. but hey, who's complaining? (:

I kind of want to cry a little bit out of happiness. I love Becca. She basically just lived out my fantasy in this story. I'm so freaking jealous... Plus, you have this nice little moral...hahaha, players are good to play with but your brothers best friend is forever. Heehee...

it was so cute and adorable and *is left speechless and cant describe story anymore*

reminds me of a cliche-y movie or something only a hell of a lot awesomer

i generally dislike one shots but this was so flipping awesome!

i like how the ppl in the story werent as stereotypical as ppl of their kind generally tend to be in other stories

i luv it

it just brightened up my depressing day

thank u!

~ jimi

aw! that was soo flippen adorable! i love it! i'm happy that Callum didn't turn out to be a jerk. it was short, sweet, and to the point. i'm happy that you decided to make this a short story. anyways, i cant wait until the next chapter for 'What I Want in a Guy' comes out!

This short story is possibly one of the best I've ever read! It's so much nicer and more fulfilling. I'm glad Callum didn't turn out to be some sort of idiotic "jock" type thing. Yay, happy endings too.. Gotta love it!

This was so cute! Usually i'm not a one-shot fan but you wrote this one so well! Gosh i just wish MY brother's friend would like me lol! i hope you update what i want in a guy soon too!

wwha? its one-shot? haha. okay. its GREAT xoxox/

I loved it!

It was way long.

I was half way through and i was thinking, is this going to be how long every chapter was? and then i thought to myself, what else can happen in those chapters.

but, whatever.

i loved it!

it was so great!

That was soo awesome! I love it! great job! 110%!

amazingly well written, and okay the plot was slightly cliche but your words made it seem anything but typical. ace.