Reviews for Hell's Motel Is Cheeper Than The One We Got
G. Stephens chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Oh, the drama! A smell a story behind this poem- an interesting one at that. Why did he (or the narrator) leave? I'm actually quite the little fan of your repetition; it gives it rhythm and flow, and also emphasises the damnation more than you could have done by just putting it in bold in the first bit.

Damn

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is far better than

DAMN

I rest my case ;D
Nokturnal Augury chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
*shiver* Shit, try reading that while listening to Disenchanted. o.o *rubbing the goosebumps away*
Arichos chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
Wow, lotta negative feelings here...i can't quiete understand the point behind it, but its still a good poem.